Custom creatures,miniatures Version:4.3 G/R/B/U/W

Interesting armies!  Thanks for posting them.

Until you have the hit zone images, I'd suggest that you include some small text in the hit zone box to explain how many figures are used for each army card.

Transform
These cards do not explain what happens to the Villagers when they transform. I guess they change into Howlpack (since they also transform) but I think it worth adding to the card text.

There are a couple of other powers that might be made a bit clearer with some wording changes.  I'll look at these all in more detail later and provide some examples and suggestions.

Thanks everyone, feel free to leave suggestions and things of the sort. i don't mind changing cards if its something we all like since this while ill be using some i might not get around to all of them so its also for the community. i might hit some days where i can't post or add cards but ill make sure to finish this. i will be also putting versions on the title so you guys can see the new cards.

i just added creature Numbers to the cards so look forward to that next post. also im bad with wording so if you want to help clean up my text feel free to. if you need something posted to make that easier just let me know.

Howlpack of Estwald - Hunting Pack
The point of the skill is to gain +2 movement towards wounded targets, not away or past them.


Gnoll Warriors - Unified Strike
This ability when gnoll attacks target 1 he gets no bonus, gnoll 2 attacks target 1 +1 attack, etc. if a gnoll attacks target 2 they don't gain that bonus unless two or more gnolls attack target 2.


Gnoll Warriors - Ability Two
I gotta fix that one big time. Gonna re word it to be, when gnolls become attacked they gain 1+ defense for each gnoll attacked until end of turn

Gnoll Warriors - First Strike
I think I copied the card that came with the expansion I'll double check the wording.

Nath's Elite - Wither
Yup,One or the other not both

Nath's Elite - Rally
Yup summoned

Talara's Battalion - Intense Strike
Copied the fire cats I'll double check wording.

like i said im not good with wording so help is appreciated ill go back and fix those things in a bit. 

zackzeta, here are some thoughts on the cards.  You have some very nice powers here.

Zada's Commando - Binding Shot
Can this be used in addition to a regular attack? Or does this replace the regular attack? (In addition sounds good to me, but the card should be precise on this).
You might save some space on the card by BOLDING the words Sword, Shield and Blank. Then you might not need the blank lines between the possible results.

Goblin Rabblemasters - Call to Battle
Summon is a PW ability, so I think a different word is needed.
Something like:
At the start of your turn with Goblin Rabblemasters, if there is a Goblin Rabblemaster in your reserve or your graveyard, you may place it adjacent to another Goblin Rabblemaster already on the map. You may not have more than four Goblin Rabblemasters on the map.

Goblin Razerunners - Goblin Rage
Once per turn when a goblin deals
might be
Once per turn if any goblin in your army deals
(It should not trigger if an opponent also has Goblins)

Goblin Razerunners - Suicide Run
Does each goblin sacrificed deal damage equal to the number of counters?

Skirk Shaman - Goblin infusion
This should also only apply if the Shaman army card is the one that is activated for the turn. It might be best to specify if the friendly unit is activated before or after the Shaman.
Example:
Before activating Skirk Shaman this turn, chose a friendly army card and take a turn with that army. They gain +1 / +1 . If they are Goblins, they gain +2 / +2 . Then take a turn with the Shaman.

Skirk Shaman - Flame chain
This is similar to Trample. I'd suggest using similar wording but call it Flame Chain and add that it continues as long as there is an adjacent enemy and unassigned damage

Goblin Goon - Trample
correct wording - change Skirk Shaman to Goblin Goon

Goblin Goon - Overwhelming Size
If I attack with the Goon and roll 1 sword but the enemy unit has only 1 defense and rolls a blank, I still only do 1 damage, correct?

Berserker Orc - Chaotic Swing
Deal half - Is this an attack and the enemy figure gets to roll defense?
Do I roll attack a second time for the adjacent figure?

Berserker Orc - Chaotic Speed
I'm not understanding this one.

Kragma Butchers - Inspired
The Goblin Razerunners use counters for +1 / +1 . Perhaps this could use those same counters with a maximum of one added per turn?
If a Butcher is killed does the card also gain +1/+1?Is there a maximum # of counters that the card can have added?

Gang of Devils - Explosion
Is this for each figure or when the entire army card is defeated?
Is the damage to adjacent creatures or PWs?

Charmbreaker Devils - Equivalent Exchange
Sacrifice 1 Charmberaker Devil. Select one spell card from your graveyard, use it immediately, then return it to your graveyard. This does not count toward the players cast limit.
You may want to also indicate if this can be done after the Devil has attacked or not.

Charmbreaker Devils - Transmute
Does the spell played during Equivalent Exchange count toward this bonus?

Flamekin Harbingers - Spellbind
Would this be limited to Sorcery spells?

Charmbreaker Devils - Equivalent Exchange
Sacrifice 1 Charmberaker Devil. Select one spell card from your graveyard, use it immediately, then return it to your graveyard. This does not count toward the players cast limit.
You may want to also indicate if this can be done after the Devil has attacked or not.

My curiosity was if this Sacrifice could happen after a Devil had already attacked - so attack and then be sacrificed.  Or would Sacrifice need to be done before any Devils attack?


Charmbreaker Devils - Equivalent Exchange
hm why? you can't cast on attack phase correct? unless the way i worded would counter that rule

Correct, normally you can't cast during attack, but depending on the wording, since you are selecting a card from your graveyard and then returning it to the graveyard, I think the wording could over-ride the normal rule.

If you want the player to choose and to allow both before or after, that is fine. I suggest that you include your decision as a part of the on the card so that others playing with the card KNOW what is allowed and do not have to spend game time discussing if what they did is 'legal'.

Often my comments reflect that I could see a variety of ways in which a might be interpreted.   While I want to know the answer, it is my subtle hint that the might not always be interpreted the same way, and being very specific might avoid in-game discussion.

thanks once i finish the colors ill be cleaning up the text as for balance that will be tough and ill need help because i dont get to play as much as i would like. also if you guys have any suggestions on changing or improving things, making something better just let me know.

Bloodline Keeper & Lord of Lineage


yeah im gonna have to change to when a vampire you control dies and wounds stay.


Vampire Outcasts - hunger
hunger is meant to permanently increase their life by 1


Phylactery Lich

Raise the dead -yeah unfortunely it hard to have that mechanic without making it op, i couldnt find a way to word it so that it says something like, it has wounds equal to its life minus 1

Indestructable -yup just like mtg
Lich Force - sounds good however the only problem with this wording is that it happens only when you activate so he we most likely never die, ill keep most of your wording but not keep the activation part



Haakom Stromgald Scourge

Rise Again - yes correct


Ghoulraisers

Rise and Raise the Dead (Phylactery Lich) its meant to be undead for flavor and bonuses just like mtg i would think that once it leaves the board it loses any things that modified it.



Champion of Stray Souls

Life Swap -yes but only one the rest stay
Deadly Deal - the same in which it originally had


Shrike Harpies

sounds good.


Daggerdrome Imps

Rise Above - the point was to stimulate them flying in the sky and coming down where ever they wanted to

Phantasmal Beast - Suspend -
i made a mistake it should be only 1 hero creature, i might lower the starting stats to 0/0 and lower movement but it's meant to be infinite if need be.

Phantasmal Dragons - Fade - perhaps:
If a Phantasmal Dragon flies over an enemy figure, roll one die. If the result is do one damage to that figure. Maximum 1 damage per figure per turn.

Phantasmal Images -
mistake on name, had trouble with the wording of this one it should copy an enemies squad card and become it.

Phantasmal Bears - As One -yeah everything transfers

Harbinger of the Tides - Call of the waves - yes,its to help bring some better gameplay with the water mechanic because as of now its lack luster.

Harbinger of the Tides - Kraken - nope but needs to be once per turn and he needs to be activated (need to add that)

Kraken Tentacle - Frightening sight - block line of sight
yeah true good point i might add a template for it.

Talrand Sky Summoner -
Drake - Call of the Drake - yes, only with him

Merrow Wavebreakers - Dive - i think i meant to be adjacent however with the lack of water i think it might be better to dive anywhere.

i still haven't even finished the been really busy lately but dont worry i plan on finishing and adding in all the suggestions!